Pitch
Feedback
WWW
-many people said that they liked my colour palettes for both of my editions
-quite a lot of my feedback said that they liked the location ideas
EBI
-most of my feedback mentioned Intertextual references.
-I am going to add most of my Intertextual references to my cover lines. For example, I am going to include ‘short n sweet beauty secrets’ as a reference to Sabrina Carpenter’s tour. I am also going to add ‘The summer my curls turned pretty’ as a reference to The Summer I Turned Pretty. I am going to mention these references in my website to show convergence.
-I could also add audience interaction through a #. People can post their own haircare / skincare routines under the # for a chance to win a give away for either haircare / skincare products
